Writing samples and commentary for a pest control e-commerce site

A Place for EverythingLegacy systems forced people to get creative, and not in a good way. Essential information like package size and product category frequently got shoehorned into the title to try and help customers. Otherwise, it wouldn’t be evi…

A Place for Everything

Legacy systems forced people to get creative, and not in a good way. Essential information like package size and product category frequently got shoehorned into the title to try and help customers. Otherwise, it wouldn’t be evident at all. I researched top ecommerce performers to get an idea of the best way to structure the plethora of information we needed to get across.

Is There a Problem?Certain accounts don’t have access to certain products. When wandering into a section with said products, these users were greeted with a message that made it seem like a site error. A simple, considerate change in language can give customer service a break.

Is There a Problem?

Certain accounts don’t have access to certain products. When wandering into a section with said products, these users were greeted with a message that made it seem like a site error. A simple, considerate change in language can give customer service a break.

Not That Quick, Actually

A CTA for “Quick Lists” (essentially a favorites section) muddled its message and buried its button.

Oh, That’s What You Want Me to Click On

Oh, That’s What You Want Me to Click On